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From: David Johnston <rgorman@telusplanet.net>
To: <zaxxon@sfcreators.com>
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Sent: Saturday, February 12, 2000 2:05 AM
Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ranma/SM] "In the Shadow of the Phoenix Moon" Part 1
Aghast, Pluto asked, "How could you... You'll lose your
Throne...
Do you know what you've done? You're not *married*!"
It was Serenity's turn to narrow her eyes as she replied, "It
was
*you* who pointed out that most Serenitys don't marry and that 'Maiden
of Magic' is only an title like 'General.' After if my *mother* was
always a 'Maiden' then where did *I* come from?"
This exchange doesn't make sense. If Serenity wouldn't stand a risk of
losing her throne then Pluto would know it. In fact Pluto does know it,
so why does she say such a thing?
I think this shows that Pluto is surprised, Serenity just told her something
she
was not expecting and just blurted out something kind of stupid. It happens
to even the best of us. Pluto probably felt kind of silly later.
of Magic' is only an title like 'General.' After if my *mother* was
always a 'Maiden' then where did *I* come from?"
Surprised, Pluto defensively exclaimed, "Nani?!?"
Or is Pluto just downright stupid?
"Combat Sorcerer Uma[1] of Saturn," Serenity stated proudly.
Combat
Sorcerers were those who studied both the Martial Arts of Mars, the
Footnotes? Why footnotes?
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This is an interesting fic and I am eagerly awaiting the next part.