From: Guilherme Loureiro <peewee@rj.sol.com.br>
To: ffml@fanfic.com
Subject: [FFML] Re: [FIC][Wraith][R1/2]
Date: Fri, 11 Feb 2000 06:40:33 -0200


>
> A Normal Night and Day.
>
> I hate rapist.
rapists
> been beefed up. A lot more guards with heavier firepower. One of them has
an
> auto shotgun. I'll have to remember to pick that up once he's dead
Huh, this sounds familiar...
 >  Using the one good technique the fat man came
Heh, if Ranma doesn't respect his father, why would his other personality
have any more consideration for Genma?
> up with, Umisen.
I was going to correct you, saying it's Umisenken, then I remembered the
"ken" stands for technique
> I know Ranma promised not to use this, nut I'm not Ranma.
Nice. I guess he's opposite to Ranma in all aspects, isn't he?
> The guy in front of me is holding a FN M249 Para, I've FN P90
Suspicions confirmed, you do play Counterstrike.

They had a good selection of firearms.

Two other comments:

You missed a "got" in the sentence. Also why would a gang member carry a
fire support machinegun, especially if he's alone?

Sorry, I just began to pick weapons at random.

> a chair as he rubs his temples. "Friggin idiots! Can't stop one man, ONE
> MAN!!"
"Especially one who's a girl sometimes!"
> in a corner masked by Umisen
Here I think Umisenken would be better
> other girls nod in agreement. "Sugar, the way I see it, he's just another
> murder."
murderer
> In a small corner of Ranma's mind another person watches the exchange.
> Author notes: I apologize for the darkness of this fic. I promise to
release
> the more lighthearted stuff in the future. I really don't have any plans
for
> this, these two chapters just kind of sprung themselves on me. C&C
welcome.
Please continue this! I loved the story!

Guilherme Loureiro

Another Author asked to take a swing at this. Since I had no plans to continue this and have enough with work with my current two projects I let him have it.

Jeremy Evans

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