Q Prometheus Rice III a �crit :
From: "Gentleman Caller" <gcaller@hotmail.com>
From: "David Eddy" <dje@progress.com>
Sliding her door closed with a sigh, Asuka leaned
back against it and closed her eyes. Curse that rotten
device! She had no idea what it was doing to her, but it
was doing *something*, and now it had become almost
unbearable.
Thus comes the sex. Nice job... Although I've never been a genius
girl
who's read too many books, this does all strike me as realistic. Asuka's
just controlling enough to, once she got used to having the simulation body
inside of herself, explore what was going on so that she would be in
control. (At least, mostly in control. :)
I think she would have been a lot more freaked out at first. I mean, who
here didn't have all logic go out the window the first time (err) "that"
happened...
Actually, the freaking out part is more in line with the Asuka
from the series. In the episode where her synch ratio starts its*
downward spiral, the restroom scene seems to hint that the cause
is Asuka's reaction of denial when her first period hits.
And, in the EVA timeline, the mindrape occurs right after that,
sending Asuka into full-fledged depression leading to her eventual
alleged suicide attempt.
Now Ritsuko's little ploy could seem a good idea to cure the first
problem, at least for anyone hentai enough, but there is very little
time, in the original series, between the first symptoms and Asuka's
complete collapse.
Sitting at her desk in school, Asuka thanked Gott in
Himmel that the stupid 'simulation body' - actually a
cruel joke, she now thought - seemed to have become more
bearable. It had been all she could do to stifle her
gasps during class, but somehow she had made it through
the morning.
Might be interesting to insert someone who's caught on to what's
happening with her. I don't know who, really, but you'ld think someone
might catch on... possibly whoever sits behind her in class.
I would at least think someone would wonder why her eyes keep rolling back
in her head... teacher may take it as an insult, yunnow...
But who would be "educated" enough to catch on? The icing on the cake would
be to have Ayanami guess what's happening, and open fire with her usual
matter-of-fact demeanor, but, from what he posted on his page ,Mr Eddy
does have some other plans for Rei.
...to be continued...
Please do!
Yes yes yes... sooner rather than later!
I especially like the ending of the synopsis that one can find after the
version posted on David's page.
J.