----- Original Message -----
From: Jamie and Bridget Wilde <wildeman@psn.net>
To: David Lindquist <bgcrisis@rma.edu>
Cc: FFML <ffml@fanfic.com>
Sent: Wednesday, February 09, 2000 1:08 AM
Subject: Re: C&C [FFML] [Fanfic][R1/2][Fusion] The Saotome Gambit Part 4
David Lindquist wrote:
----- Original Message -----
From: Jamie and Bridget Wilde <wildeman@psn.net>
To: <ffml@fanfic.com>
Sent: Sunday, February 06, 2000 7:37 PM
Subject: [FFML] [Fanfic][R1/2][Fusion] The Saotome Gambit Part 4
<big snip>
"And nothing's changed! I don't want to marry this pervert."
I don't know about her calling him a pervert. He hasn't done anything
that could really be considered perverted other than his curse.
If you want to keep it though(I think you should btw) I suggest that
you have Akane fumble a little for a word to call him then latch onto
pervert. suggestion:I don't want to marry this...this pervert!!
I think I'm going to go with 'freak' instead of pervert from here on
out.
I don't think 'freak' will work.. The main problem with it is that
techically it's true.
Ranma can be considered a freak. It seems extremely cruel for her to call
him
that and I couldn't see him ever forgiving her for it myself.
Here's an idea:Keep her calling him a pervert then when they have their
first MAJOR argument have him yell why the hell does she keep calling him
that. then you can have her respond because it's better than calling him a
freak.
just a thought.
"I choose you - PIKASPEW!!!"
Jamie to 2 month old daughter Madeline,
shortly after being spat up upon...
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