Subject: [FFML] Re: [Slayers] Slayers Demiurge, Book Six - Vulnerability
From: Sebastian Weinberg
Date: 2/9/2000, 2:52 PM
To: Fanfiction ML


Mina-san, Ohayou!

On 5 Feb, Twoflower wrote:

:                        [ Slayers Demiurge ]
: 
:                              book six
:                           "Vulnerability"

: %    (Her armor and boots were designed not to make any noise, and 

Any reason for the percent mark, or is it just an accident?


: "Amelia's clearly feeling strain over this, and seems to have divulged all 
: her hope in you.

Err, are you sure you mean "divulged", as in "reveal, open"? 
Doesn't seem to make much sense to me.


:      "Ah... I suppose so," Zoamel said.  "We have skills in differing areas 
: that compliment well."

I think you mean "complement".


: "Speak your peace and leave, miss.

He probably meant "piece"-


:      "Don't be a wuss, mom!" Gabby interjected.
: 
:      Naga snapped.  "Gabby!  What did I tell you about insulting people?!"
: 
:      "...I'm sorry, mum," Gabby said, meekly.  "I meant, 'Don't be a yellow 
: bellied sand crawling cowardly little dog unworthy of licking the dirt off my 
: knee high leather boots, you sad little spineless being.'"

Bwaaaahahahahahahahahahah!


: "I'll have to feed Helga in a few hours, 

Surely that's "Olga", if she didn't drop another sprog during the
night.


:      "What?  You two were too busy fighting to eat them.  And it's not like 
: Helga would eat them, she doesn't got her teeth in yet."

Hmmm, if you've gone to "Helga" full time, perhaps you should
adjust the earlier occurrences of "Olga".


Sebastian
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