Ah yes, the next part of this, how shall we say it?
Interesting series. Hehe.... nice job... funny and "subtle"
humor. I especially liked the toili and evanjelly donut
references. Can't say a thing about the children of an elder
God though as i haven't read it yet. Although I'm surprised
Mr. Huang was willing to let his.... persona be used in such
a way....
Overall fun to read, very light, and i couldn't think of a
thing taht you could possibly do to make this better.
(Hmm.... adding lemon scenes might make it.... WHAM! DOWN
BOY!) Stay safe and God Bless. Hope to see more.
kelvin
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-----Original Message-----
From: E.L. Toh <teloong@cwcom.net>
To: ffml@fanfic.com <ffml@fanfic.com>
Date: Friday, February 04, 2000 10:31 PM
Subject: [FFML] [Fanfic][Eva/Ranma/El Hazard][LIME] Ramen 4
Parts 1-3 are available at http://www.teloong.mcmail.com/
Yes, it does help if you've read them before.