--- LadyCailin@aol.com wrote:
In a message dated 2/2/00 8:36:32 PM Eastern
Standard Time,
master_l_@yahoo.com writes:
I'm sure it WOULDN'T make the story more
enjoyable if
we already know it's going to happen.
You might also want to put your notes at the end,
so
readers can get right to the story and ignore
your
thoughts and feelings when their done.
:)
Oooh struck a cored did I? ::tisk::tisk:: They
can skip through my
thoughts and feelings whether there at the bottom or
top of the e-mail. It's
all a matter of clicking the mouse.
Heh. I was actually just joking, but it really does
help if people get to the story faster.
> "You pervert! Come back here!!" Happousai
sprinted
Only one exclamation mark needed at the end
there.
Those are done for effect. Putting things in
caps to indentify a
character is screaming looks ugly.
I guess it's pretty much a moot point, so I won't
argue further.
This is what I don't understand: Why can't she
just
speak Chinese? She HAS to know their Chinese if
she
knew Shampoo by name. She's also spoken Chinese
to him
before ('Ni Hao' 'Shei shei' etc.), so why can't
she
do the same here?
I just didn't want her to. ::grin::
Shampoo if you haven't noticed in the anime,
speaks in Japanese at all
times, even when alone with her grandmother. Why
shouldn't Mylee do the same?
I always thought that was because Cologne wanted her
to speak Japanese better by speaking more of it, but
I'm not exactly sure whether it's actually in the
series, or it's fanfic convention.
>
> "Yes, aren't you a lucky girl." Cologne
commented,
girl?
I pay attention to speach patterns. Cologne
almost always refurs to those
younger than herself as. . .well. . .younger than
herself. She often uses
things like 'child' or in this case she's calling
Mylee a girl.
Oh, you mistake me here. I understand all about that
speech pattern stuff. I just meant it needed to be a
question mark instead of a period :).
Hey before I had 'she huffed' pouting is better
than huffing any day.
I'm more of a huffing kind of guy myself, but that's
another moot point.
send as well. Thanks for your C&C
No problem.
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L.A.
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