From: "C. Jones" <guilty@furinkan.net>
To: ffml@fanfic.com
Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ranma][Shortfic][Mild Lime Flavoring] Midnight  Encounter
Date: Sun, 30 Jan 2000 20:12:28 -0600

At 01:11 PM 1/30/00 -0500, you wrote:
>
>"I love you, Happosai," she said.
>
>"I love you, Kasumi-chan," he replied.
>

Urrr...

Jack, Jack, Jack... I like your stuff. Really, I do. Some of the stuff you
(and Lady Tesser) write just makes me wonder, though...

What was the point behind this? I mean... romantically match any two given
characters. Okay I can see that. Break them completely out of character to
do so? It might as well have been Nodoka and P-Chan or Hiroshi and Shampoo.
Seriously.

There's nothing truly 'tender' about Happosai. That doesn't mean he doesn't
love Kasumi. That doesn't mean someone as nice as Kasumi couldn't find
something to love about Happi.

Characterization really is kinda important. Don't forget about it when
trying to make a point.

Um i hate to say this but the characters didn't seem OOC.
Well there is the fact that kasumi has little to no
character development done by Takahashi and as to Happosai
why wouldn't he? He did fall in love with Cologne.


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