It's a good idea to put the title of a fic in the subject line.
BROTHER OF MINE
Soun Tendo sat down quietly at the dinner table, sheafing through the
mail. A quiet ritual that antithesised the thundering rain outside.
"sheafing"? "antithesised"?
A couple of notes here. It's highly unlikely that Ranma weighs 90 lbs.
140, maybe. He hasn't quite reached his full growth, but he's pretty
well filled out.
To quote from the first episode, "Hot! Not boiling!". Ryoga may be
tough, but thats no reason to scald him.
It's not terribly that Genma would have taught them the "senken"
techniques. If he did, the umisenken would have significant
psychological effects on the boy who used it regularly. He'd be
pathologically sneaky. Compulsively so. That's why Genma sealed
the technique in the first place.