There are plenty of ways to post a fic via browser that is properly wrapped.
What you do is write it in a text editor and then copy/paste it into the
browser.
It definately sounds intriguing and has a great deal of promise, but the
*thought* is not the way to do it. Thoughts should be written inline, rather
than demarked by any sort of fake quoting (and quotes are purely for speech).
My biggest gripe, though (my e-mail program wrapped it for me), is that we
*STILL* don't know what's going on. This isn't a teaser in the sense that
there's no clue as to what's happening (since you've denied the Elm St./Ranma
cross over which is the only thing apparent from both the original and this).
Teaser writing is *TOUGH*, almost tougher than writing an actual fic, because
teasers basically have to show the climax but not what leads up to the climax
and not what happens after the climax, and not spoil the climax, either.
Another way to write them is similar to movie trailers (but I've not seen one
like that). Your first teaser was quite the catcher (I rarely reply to a
teaser), but calling this a teaser does a great disservice to both it and
teasers.
Thus, I don't write teasers. :)
I do look forward to reading a properly formatted, completed, and in-line
thoughts version of it.
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Ben Kosse <bkosse@iname.com>