Subject: [FFML] Re: [R1/2][...huh?]
From: David Johnston
Date: 1/19/2000, 7:24 AM
To: DeAtHBoY9@aol.com
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

DeAtHBoY9@aol.com wrote:

NEEEEEEEEEEED C&C!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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     Chapter 1: Misfortune
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"Quoth the Raven: 'Nevermore'"

The style here isn't too bad, but it doesn't make any sense.  
There is no way for a nation that has been defeated in any 
meaningful sense to inflict this kind of damage on the victors after the 
defeat.  There is no way that young men of near-military age would not 
be out fighting in foreign battlegrounds if Japan was engaged in 
conquering the world, particularly ones with Ryoga and Ranma's 
capabilities.



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