I was seriously considering throwing in a little extra bit at the end with
the two of them at the edge of the pool they landed in.  Ranma muttering and
wringing out her shirt with Falcon bright red trying not to look at her
'assets.'

da Donovan

Jean Nadeau wrote:

You know i kindda like it and it would probably make a good short story.
Specially with the reaction from the doc after they jumped from the building

;)

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