On Tuesday, January 18, 2000 21:48 PM, Raye Johnsen
[SMTP:raye_j@yahoo.com] wrote:
The fic was well-written, with grammar, spelling and
style all correct. It made it a real shame that it was
all so OOC that I felt I was watching the Furinkan
High school play.
Actually, that might not be a bad way to end the fic. With a
Narrator reading to the audience the line about the bomber. And with
someone like Kuno turning to someone else and announcing "I told you
I could write a play"
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Ben L. Harrison - HM1(FMF)/USN/RET
Harriso3@ix.netcom.com
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Anime Excuse #219 Akane made my lunch
Anime Excuse #221 Tried to break up a fight between Rei and Usagi
Anime Excuse #230 Got between Lina Inverse and Lunch
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Member SME Team