Well, Doug Mac's gone over this pretty thoroughly. :) I just want

to

say that you should take the time to read Andy Wennersten's

"Proper

Punishment". Your fic is starting off very similarly, and reading

ACK!!! Apologies. Make that _*Tom Wrensch's*_ "Proper Punishment."
Sorry, Tom.

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