All and all a good little fic, with just the right amount of rambling
and gushing emotion to be convincing as the kind of cathartic letter
Myung would write to Isamu. There were some formatting problems,
however. It doesn't appear as if you are using hard returns after about
72 characters in each line, and the resultant line breaks make the 'fic
difficult to read.
J. Austin Wilde
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"I choose you - PIKASPEW!!!"
Jamie to 2 month old daughter Madeline,
shortly after being spat up upon...
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