allyn yonge writes:
Eyes burning with a wild light Tendou Soun held the
telegram in his hands with trembling fingers.
//Have found them STOP. Chasing them your way STOP
Kill them all STOP Be victorious or let no one return
alive STOP
VENGEANCE is ours STOP
Heideko Tendou
ps don't forget to pick up a roast for lunch and go
by the dry cleaners and get your good suit STOP//
My compliments, and let me just offer this as an example
to those of you who toss out ideas to the mailing list. This
is the way to do it. I have a hard time buying the scenario
described in the original message, but I would be willing
to swallow it if it resulted in a story like this fragment.
Heck, I'd take it just for a story featuring the Mrs. Tendo
who sent that telegram. Kudos.
Reid Carson
rcarson@rcarson.com