Michael Gilson wrote:

Very good. The only part I had trouble with was part
3, the spoof of  "Ranma gets all the girls" lemons.
The problem was it was too well written. I could almost
take it seriously. Almost.
Michael Gilson /8^{)

Certainly wasn't meant to be serious :P

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