As much as I'd love to comment, due to the fact I am a new memeber the story 
sorta got me...well...LOST. So, I have much difficulty commenting. Aside from 
the fact I was lost...I read part of it....well as much as I could, and you 
have quite a way with spinning a tale.

Satoshi


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