Samantha Williams wrote:
Nezumi
A Ranma 1/2 WOD Fusion by
Soul Survivor
Disclaimer:
Domo Arigato Takahashi-sama for your wonderous work in Ranma 1/2. I would
never presume to claim your work for mine own, I simply borrow from your
genius to entertain those who would read my work. Please do not send your
legions of Rabid Attack Lawyers for I am a simple person and broke to boot.
Chapter 2 - Blood Memory
tolerated. Chittering an order to his companions, he led the way down the
anchor rope and into the bay, swimming as fast as his four feet could carry
him to the shoreline, their departure was noticed by a crewman on deck, who
muttered something about rats and sinking ships before returning his
attention to his rum.
The above was interesting, but the transition to the next part was
very jarring. If that is your intent well and good, but it would be
helpful if it were a bit better explained. If it isn't you might try
something like this,
`The scene slowly faded from his mind, and he found himself awake
again.'
Or something like this would be helpful.
He was awake again, or he thought he was at least, his last clear
recollection being the strange woman in front of Ucchan's. Where was he
now? His mind was filled with disjointed memories, dreams blending with
reality, all overlaing with a chittering that he could almost understand.
'sleep' it said, 'sleep for there is more to see' not having the energy to
^ It would be a good
idea to stop the sentence her.
to do otherwise, he complied.
mortal blow, more of a festering tear in the harmony around him. The
very
essence of the land itself seemed bound and constrained, begging to be let
free, pleading for release from the seemingly endless strands that bound it
tight. Worse, it was not the city alone, for the countryside around it was
slowly being drawn in, captured, restraind, ordered and regulated.
Interesting, but will she teach him of the taint of the Wyrm? I
also wonder what she would think of Glass Walkers?
'Look now upon the works of man, who in allaince with the weaver is bringing
this age to a close.'
You have to admit there is a bit if Weaver in Wyld however, and
needed there too. Sorry, this is getting a little off subject isn't
it.
"What do you mean? Whats going on? Who are you?"
'You have many questions warrior, I am here to answer them.' A haze formed
in front of him, slowly resolving into the form of a giant rat, about ten
. It stood
about ten...
feet tall at the shoulder, strangely enough, this didnt bother him. Then it
, which strangely enough,
This is just a personal preference. Could go either way on this.
clear in time"
I do hope so.
Absorbing this tidbit brought the next logical question "Why me? I may be
the best martial artist around, but how can I affect this?"
Ever the arrogant boy isn't he?
"Why you? Why not? You are as you claim, an excelent fighter, and fighters
are what I need. True, you alone cannot affect much, or can you" the last
you?"
was said with an expression that was _way_ to reminiscent of Nabiki for his
liking.
"That I may young warrior, that I may. If I do, I am sure you will figure
it out in time. For now, let us say that you have talents that can be of
great use to me, in return for which I am granting you strength, speed and
to me. In return
abilities beyond what you could achieve on your own. Provided of course you
Ranma stood there, replaying the conversation in his head when something
that was said finally penetrated. "Whadaya mean _IF_ I survive?!?!"
Hehe.
Ps. Folks, I could really use som C&C here! Aside from Redemption which is
undergoing an overhaul as well as retitling (I found another fic with that
title) This is my first real major attempt at Fan Fiction. Chapter One
only got 3 responses which where mostly questions on where it was going.
Don't be discouraged, for every on response, I'm guessing there
are at least 4 or 5 other people that are interested, but don't say
anything. I'd say that's a low ball estimate as well. Keep up the good
work.
Stay tuned for Chapter 3 "First Change"
That ought to be interesting. Nice to see something a bit
different from the vampire, or werewolf angle.