Subject: [FFML] Re: [Fanfic][Ranma][REVISED]A Stained Glass Mind[3/?]
From: "C. Jones" <cjones@arn.net>
Date: 12/17/1999, 5:17 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

Ranma 1/2 is owned by Rumiko Takahashi.
A Tribe of One is owned by TSR


SGM is one of my favorite what-if Ranma stories. This chapter is quite a variation, but still holds my interest.

While I may be mistaken, I beleive that Guardian told Nodoka about Ranma's curse in the old story. Ranma's continued decision to keep the curse a secret is a risky move and *could* hurt the readability of the story.

The scene with Nabiki, Bitter, and Nodoka was classic Takahashi, though.

Looking forward to #4.

C.

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