I'm sure I'm not the first to write ya about this, sugar...
but I've gone through it. Can't vouch for the characters
themselves, as I've not seen a lick of Evangelion (and
won't for some time, since 'Natsu-chan's rather insistent),
but I've been enjoying the story immensely thus far...
In retaliation, Rei reached behind her and grabbed a blue
paintbrush. With a flurry of movement, she wrote 'oak tree' on Shinji's
chest and an arrow down to his groin.
Tenshin Amaguriken revised - Anything-Goes Martial Arts
Body Painting!
Rei waited for something to happen. Half of her was longing for his
kiss and the other half was screaming about the pain from her hip where
he had landed on her. She ignored the later, in hopes of the former.
ignored the latter,
"No! I never did!" Shinji snapped, earning a pleased smiled from
Rei. "Except for that one time she tricked me, and we didn't... you
know... finish."
a pleased smile
"Third, you get a vasectomy."
"Deal..." Shinji's balls receded into his body when they realized
what he had just agreed to. His brain figured it out a second later
since it had a slightly lower I.Q. than his balls. "What?!"
Geez, Shinji... it's not *that* big a deal...
"And my third and last condition..."
Everyone leaned forward to hear Yui's last condition.
"That you both live happily ever after."
::facefault::quick recovery:: Yay! Don't we all wish!
Shinji looked at the package and frowned. "Err... well, she's
already pregnant."
A light bulb went off in Touji's head.
And that light was pretty dim to begin with, ne? ^_^;;
He glared at the two boys he had been kicking earlier.
"They or their sisters get screwed. Personally, I'd prefer the later,
so don't le t me down."
If Hasamoto prefers the *latter* (sorry, we've been here before,
ne?), wouldn't he *want* them to fail, so as to give 'im an
excuse?
"But you don't and have never have thought of Kaworu as a bad
person, right?"
One of those "have"s has got to go. Your choice, unless
some other grammar mavens here would care to comment...
The girl on Hasamoto's team dropped the legs of the broken chair
and exhaled.
Been waiting for that. ^_^
"So I'm just a replacement Rei, am I?" She kicked him in
his acorns and turned away. After tanking a couple steps,
Tanking? Isn't that what she'd do if they were actually playing
the game (ie, throwing the victory to the Dark EVA Knights)?
I think you want 'taking'.
she turned around to face him again. "And the name's Sawa,
you bastard!!"
::blink:: Isn't that the same name as the girl who's hot for
Misato? She's not the same girl, I take it...
For those of you who might not have seen End of Evangelion, some of the
events in the next book might contain spoilers. Unfortunately, I am
forced to use several events from Third Impact as shown in the movie to
explain Garden of EVA's Third Impact (they are not exactly the same). I
will endeavor to keep the spoilers to a minimum.
::shrug:: As you wish, sugar.
Anyway, nice job. Looking forward to the next installment
(and darn you for keeping me from my *own* writing!)
Itsu mo,
Ucchan ^_^