Sorry for the delay, but I've been kind of busy.  Anyway, I just got through reading the entire series, and I must congratulate you.  THe first chapter totally blew me away, and kept me wanting to read the rest of the story.  Not saying the rest was no good, but it was just that the first part was by far the best... I think.

Torako is a pretty cool charater, and you can see her animal nature even thogh she's mostly human.  Makes for an intresting combination.  Poor Ryoga ^_^.  I wonder where her loyalties will lie once Shampoo shows up.

I look forward to seeing future chapters of theis.

SAMAS

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