This story was very well written. I thought the black
nail polish on the yearbook picture was a good touch.
I also liked how you described her hands as slender
and thin. That is very true of all the MB characters.
They're extremely skinny! (I HATE that!)
Out of all the MB characters, I think Miki is possibly
my least favorite. She is very unrealistic, naive, and
has pissed me off more than any of the other
characters. I found this fic quite dark, but I really
did like it. Keep up the good work. ^_-
Sakuya-sama ^_^ no Jurai
(who believes that Meiko would be much better off with
a cool guy like Satoshi than a jerk like Na-chan!!!!)
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