Hi, I just wanted to comment on the sheer amount and size of the
releases from my little fanfic workshop. I only have access to an
internet ready computer for two days, I do most of my writing on and
older PC [286] that will be replaced in a month or two and I'll re
release these fics at a much smaller rate once I have more control over
my access. I'd still love to get C&C from you guys as I'll be poping in
from time to time during that time; But I won't be able to do much in the
way of fine tuning the stories or editing them any better than they are
until then.
Now to clear a few little things up.
From the Teacher.
1: I know that the king of the Musk wouldn't have minded that much that
Ryo had been a man, thats what the chisuston is for. I never said that
his marrage was the end of his troubles in China and I'll get into that
later, Ryo is much stronger than he lets on; [but not so powerful that
he'll wipe out Happosai when he shows up easily.] Even though the story
focuses on Torako; he is the title character.
2: Ryo is not a self insertion, I just wanted somebody who likes Manga
and knows the story for certain scenes. Torako is unaware of her father's
true past, so he doesn't show that he knows things much.
3.Ryo is somewhere around the size of Zangief in Street Fighter Alpha.
From My friend Pika girl.
1: My use of Jusenkyo was an intentional cop out, I was making fun of
other peoples fics without being direct about it. I did try to write it
well though.
2: Yes, Ash is a Mewtwo. I wasn't trying to be suspenseful about it
really, it was another joke. No, they don't remember the events at
Mewtwo's island, so they don't know what a Mewtwo is. I am considering
having a Mew and a reformed Mewtwo show up near the end, but I'm still
not certain. Ash's mental block of the events is going to start to break
away as well, weather or not he mentions this to the others is still in
the air right now.
3: I like team Missle, they are funny and completely anti PC; this was
also intended. They aren't dumber than the Rockets; they are equally
stupid.
4: Pokemon Cannon is flexible in this story, I can change anything I
want for the sake of comedic value. Also Ash is getting older by this
point as well, I figure at least two years pass during the show itself.
He is around thirteen in this tale; the Pikachu Party episode is where
the herd of Pikachu came from in the beginning story. I know it wasn't in
Varidian forest, but that's where you catch one in the game. I use the
game [yellow] as a refrence for who has what in Pokemon and where things
are so I don't have to watch all that damn video again. If it makes you
feel any better just think of it as another alterniverse like those
diffrent Manga out there.
Raiders of the lost Stone.
Glad you like it, Not to pull my own chain, but this is probably the
best Nodoka I've seen on the list. Yes folks, this is what she's like in
the Manga.
[This is the fic I'm most proud of in the three.]
I didn't get many complaints about this one. Everything seemed pretty
dead on at the moment and more will definitely follow later. Part 3-4 is
in the works now and you'll see it in a month or so. I also noticed you
had some strange suspicions about the old Proffessor due to some of his
dialouge and a few other scattered hints.
I love C&C and hope to see some on these stories, send it to
CarrotGlace@Juno.com
Until I write again,
Ja!
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