This piece was interesting... but I have a few nitpicks.

For an alt fic, its better just to change one thing. You
changed several:

1. Ranma admitting to his curse

2. Ranma feeling strangely at home in the Dojo

3. Blue thunder -> Scarlet (what caused this one?)

4. Ranma being able to beat Kuno - difficulty level

5. R's consideration of Akane's ability level

Also, please don't try and accent Fiancee... use
iinuzake if you have to, but the apostrophe is
annoying.

Otherwise, you have a nice writing style. Keep it up.

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