Subject: [FFML] Re: [fic][fusion][R1/2/Nuku-Nuku] After the Flesh
From: David Johnston
Date: 12/11/1999, 1:14 PM
To: Alan Harnum
CC: DB Sommer <sommer@3rdm.net>, ffml@fanfic.com

Alan Harnum wrote:

That depressing thought triggered others, and that horrible wedding fiasco
was at the top of the list. That incident had almost literally blown up in
her face. Ranma hadn't talked to anyone for almost a week before eventually
forgiving all of them for their behavior at the wedding. Actually, offering
to repair the damage went a long way to that forgiveness. Shampoo had not
wanted to destroy Ranma's house,

Destroy?  Hardly; the wedding bombing does a little damage to the dojo, but
nothing at all to the house, at least from what can be observed in the
manga.

_Ranma's house_.  The house owned by the Saotomes was destroyed (very
arbitrarily) by a quarrel between the three "other" fiancees in an event
that occured well before the wedding attempt.  It wasn't even shown on camera, 
just given as the reason why the Saotomes were moving into the Tendo household 
after Nodoka moved Ranma and Genma out.  It might be wise for the author to 
make it clearer that these were separate events.


Not even close; twenty-five yen is about a quarter at current exchange
rates, I think.

Irrelevant.  She isn't paying him 25 yen.  She's paying him an _extra_ 25 yen.
That's clear enough, I think.



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