At eleven twenty the next afternoon, Juuban middle school was in the
middle of class. Students were studying,
Now here the credibility of this fic just leaves. I mean students taking
the time to 'study' in school? I doubt that very much.
Sorry. You'll just have to suspend disbelief for a bit.
Alright, so he looked nothing like her old sempai and was around
twenty.
You know, I think this is the first time I've ever seen anyone had her
admit it's not that he looks like her old 'sempai' and that she's really
just turned on by the guy.
Considering the number of different looking guys that look like her old sempai,
unless he's a shape shifter, thats the way it works.
Makoto sighed and did the instructed job.
sounds awkward. Just say something like 'did as she was told'
What? No perverse comment? I feel short-changed.
previous set, liberated from a tourist.
I can just picture him wearing a loud tropical island style shirt with ugly
bermuda shorts. ^_^
If I wrote that scene it, I'd be Terminated in my sleep.
As it moved
down the hall, armory relocated to a duffel bag under it's
Repeat after me. 'its'
no
left arm, it
observed those also present.
A stream of binary flowed, detailing there were three individuals
standing in front of the door to the right. Two appeared to be
administrators and the third was of an indeterminable identity.
Photographic reconnaissance of her was blocked by the head of man before
her.
So the T-101 used a gun to make a hole in the head of the man blocking his
view.
It considered it but decided against later.
The principal suggested. He considered himself a strict
disciplinarian
But he's not in a league with Gompachi Chabane. Sorry.
True. He's not a cockroach.
As Makoto Kino raced through the halls, she thought quickly. Why would
he be here? What reason did he have?
Did he really look like her sempai?
These questions and more answered next time on "The Days of Our Senshi"
"Yes, Miss Mizuno?" The teacher recognized her.
If she's been in the class all year, I would assume she would recognize
her. (Might want to go with a different word there)
okey dokey
made her way to the door, stopping only to acquire the hall
pass from the teacher's desk. She paused for a moment as she was
leaving. She had not yet studied this part of the text book and hoped
this would not take long.
Moments later in an empty bathroom, she answered the call,
Ami: *FLUSH* Ah. That felt good
Oh, you didn't mean that kind of call, eh?
Two birds with one stone. Ami never wastes oppurtunities.
weight.
"Excuse me. Is Ami Mizuno here?" He had the hint of a southern accent
then it should be 'heah' instead of 'here' ^_^
sigh. I think the comment I meant southern japanese would be completely
ignored.
screamed and threw herself into the man. His first shot
went wild as she pushed his aim off. He swung his left arm then, the one
she was shoving, and carried her away with it. Her body impacted with a
load bearing column, and it snapped in half.
Durable teacher.
Big Terminator.
She stopped in the doorway to the stairs, eyes widening as she abruptly
froze. That man strode before her. He was dressed all in black, from the
boots to the trenchcoat. Dark glasses hid his eyes but she recognized
him. He was the one who had saved her earlier but what was he doing-
"MOVE!" He yelled and tackled her. A flurry of small ordinance fire
occurred,
choose a different word than 'occurred' Nothing comes to mind right now.
But there has to be something better.
while I took your advice, belief me. In T1 and T2, gun fire does just randomly
occur.
and the space she had just occupied was filled with bullets.
She lay on her back, the large man on top of her, and then her brain
began to work again. As he looked over his shoulder, she brought her
mind to focus. Time to take action. And this wasn't nearly as romantic
as she had thought this position would be.
It's ad lib time:
Especially since having his <noun> in her <noun> was proving very
uncomfortable.
Um, Gun and Holster
bottom, Cyanide kicked an emergency exit open and began to run towards
the street, Ami in tow. They were at the gate before she was able to
force him to stop for a moment.
"What about the others?" She asked.
"There are others at this school!?"
I think it usually goes '?!'
Since it's bad english to begin with, I'll use mine. I've always thought it
looked better besides.
"Fuck me in the goat ass!"
Leads an interesting life, he does.
Everyone needs their hobbies.
is that they don't go away.
While this isn't that interesting, admittedly, it is something often
forgot about. Thus one black van, driving down main street, looked like
there was a disco party inside as rays of light that covered the entire
rainbow emanated from within.
Now that paints a nasty picture. ^_^
I try.
"Great. I'm getting a porn show from a bunch of thirteen year olds in
the back of my van."
Hey! There are people that would pay good money for that.
.... no comment
Nice work. More typos than usual, though
I figured as much.
Thanks.
Miashara