Raye:

This fic is:
1) Rated PG. Someone gets born and someone else thinks
about their sex life.
2) A spoiler for RG Veda canon.
3) An alternate universe. A VERY alternate universe.
4) The first chapter in a long fic.

Excellent!!! Something to look forward too!

Please enjoy!

Oh, Did I ever!

Raye

Chapter One

by Raye Johnsen
raye_j@yahoo.com

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You know what? I have never seen the anime nor read the manga of
RG Veda. I think I might have heard of it once. I don't know what
possessed me to read a fanfic to a series I knew nothing about, but
I'm glad I did. After reading this, I went out and tried to learn
anything and everything I could about this series and I must admit
that I'm already hooked to it. Thank you for inadvertedly introducing
me to a very interesting series.

As for your fic, it was very well written and read like a final copy
rather than the draft copies that usually get sent to the FFML. I'm
attached to Hanako and Shinobu already, and I'm upset they're not
in the original series. I really like your style of writing, it's
clear, fast paced, and has a 'wry grin' sort of tone to it. The
notes at the end of the chapter explaining the names were really fun
and I enjoyed them. I really look forward to seeing the next chapter,
whenever that may be!

To anyone who has not read this fic: READ IT.

Jenny 'Android18' Chan

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