First time I do this. Oh well
"Dammit," She clouted the overly handsome
clouted?
"It's not like that," Rouga protested. "We're
Ryouga
"Yeah, almost a soccer team." Rouga said
Ryouga
2)Oda is dead. Nabiki strangled him. ^_^
I guessed this from the ending of part 4, although I saw other people
didn't, so you could make it a bit clearer, it's way better than explaining
this now
5)Getting shot in the head and surviving. This has
actually happened and been documented on several
occasions with both humans and animals. Hitting and
skidding seems to depend on velocity, shape of bullet
and angle of hit. (and a LOT of luck. ^_^ )
There has also been at least one instance of a person
(male) surviving a through-and-through shot to the
head where the round passed _between_ the
hemispheres of the brain doing minimal damage.
Here in Brazil a guy got stabbed between the eyes with a kitchen knife,
which handle then broke off. The blade passed between the brain hemispheres,
so he didn't die. As a matter of fact, since it was too dangerous to extract
the blade, it is still there
Ok, although this is a good story, it doesn't have IMHO much connection
between it and the rest of the fanfic, and it would be better(again IMHO) to
give some explanations on what happened before. Still, I quite enjoyed the
series. Perhaps a sequel could be done, to cover up any holes?
Guilherme Loureiro