"Chan Wei Lik" <weimin@pl.jaring.my> wrote:
I've waited so long for this. Just a few mistakes here and there.
At this point, he was beginning to give up home that they'd ever stop,
Oh, and this:
I never did have Ryo-oh-ki meet Ranma. Argh.... time to go back and
rework.
(from one of your other replies), but
*MYAH*
And suddenly Ranma was not there.
Washu scratched her head, blinking at the Ranma-shaped
hole in the wall. She looked down at the her furry and
confused cabbit and asked, "What was that all about?"
Ryo-oh-oki shrugged.<<
So you DO have it in already.
What I meant was if Ryo-oh-oki comes back Again. Would Ranma be glancing
around every so often or ...
Tenchi's father beats him up in practice all the time,
You mean GRANDfather right?
And I'm sure there was one place where you used the same name twice when
you
shouldn't have. But I can't seem to find it again. Just letting you know.
Keep it up, and try not to take another year to get the next episode out.
Paul Sampson
TTFN!!!!
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