I love this, my only complaint is that you've left me hanging
in suspense, AGAIN! I can't wait to read the fight scene and
aftermath.
Nobody writes an Akane power up fic like Allyn Yonge. And it is
especially noteworthy to character partisans that he builds up
his favorite character without tearing down any others. For
example in all of them Shampoo comes across as quite intelligent.
And when a non original character is used as a villain, such as
Cologne in "Cats Have No Tears" or Sailor Pluto in "Furies",
even though you disapprove of their actions you can have sympathy
for their reasons.
Thanks for the great reads, Allyn. Please keep turning them out.
And thanks for all the great cultural information about Japan
with sources to back it up.
Michael Gilson/8^{)