Well, it was graphic, shocking, and unusual. I think it's been done
before though. I can't recall when.
On the good side, your deffinately away from the beaten path. You've
managed to head into a place that leaves a great deal of room for you
too screw around and Continuality's gone already so you don't need to
worry about it.
On the down side, you're characters seem to be one dimensional. The
Senshi are pure malicious and much like normal enemies. You'll really
have to make things bizarre or begin real character development to make
me keep reading.
And how did they get so powerful? You'd need to make that clear.
Miashara