> "Oh, Kanrinin-san." He noted her black dress and the paper-
> wrapped bundle she carried. "Is it that time, already?" he
> asked.

Not to nitpick, but she generally didn't wear black to visit
Souichirou's grave; while this is a clue as to what she's doing, I'm not
sure it fits her character.

Actually, in the manga, she has a particular black dress that she wears to all the funerals.  I don't know what it's like in the anime, though.

The only real nitpick I had was that there's no mention of *SPOILERSPOILERTHEIRCHILDSPOILERSPOILER* anywhere within the fic.  You'd figure that she'd be right there too...right?

Lawrence

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