Niice, very nice. Good choice of song, and a well
written story. I liked very much.
I have only one nitpick - given the sheer animosity
between Nephrite and Zoicite in canon SM, I have some
difficulty in seeing the sympathetic Zoicite you
portray here. I would like to see the back story where
you explain this.
Raye
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