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DB Sommer wrote:
Donny Cheng wrote:
Akane shook her head with disgust at the display by her father and
Uncle Saotome. Honestly, they turn into mindless zombies the moment
Happosai steps into the room.
More like fear-stricken cattle than mindless zombies.
True, going to steal that ^_^
Akane watched as the listless amazon sat at the counter, apparently not
in the least bit interested in what she was cooking. It jarred her to
see this. Despite her denial of Shampoo's claims on her, Akane had to
admit that having the girl around did wonders for her self-esteem.
Yeah. Not like when those yucky boys come onto her. ^_^
Heh, all boys are admittedly yucky in this fic.
the most delicate of things and many places on Akane's body still
smarted from the various pats and pinches. Though her bottom seemed to
be getting quite used to it as it didn't turn red quite a quickly now.
It's like the Breaking Point technique, only more specialized in the
location of the built up immunity to 'damage'.
Shampoo: Told you so.
Akane: Riiight.
"Akane prude," Shampoo rolled her eyes. "Let's start with easy stuff.
'Wo shi xiao xi'."
"That's easy. I've been around you long enough to know that much. I
am Akane,"
Shampoo: Actually, that mean, 'I have a yellow pencil.'
Akane: But I don't have one.
Shampoo: I give you one, but Shampoo choose where to give it to you
:P~~~
to let the girl win in some arguments, Shampoo found. Akane would
smile more often, as she was doing now. So cute.
Aww. How sweet.
A little play on Akane WAFFy scenes I've read using someone a little
different :P
"'Wo yao bei sui'... hmm, I want water?"
Shampoo: No. 'I have a veneral disease.' Can Akane no get it right?
Akane: But I don't have... er, no you don't have to try to give me it
this time.
Shampoo smiled lecherously as she got up off the chair and slinked her
body to the bed where Akane's lay. "Akane just ask me to kiss. I must
obey."
Devious little thing. ^_^
Whole thing was set up as you noted. I'm very transparent, I'm afraid
^_^
Shampoo looked up at Akane's question. She saw the girl's face soften
for a moment into a worried expression before it went back to its
regular scowling whenever she was around. "Nothing. I coming."
Whoa! That was quick. They haven't even kissed yet. ^_^
Akane whaps DB, "Hentai!"
"And what exactly will happen when Misu does win?" Nabiki asked,
dreading the answer.
It means lots of whips and chains.
Nah, just a few really
"Uh, sorry," Ranma apologized, though her eyes remained riveted to the
bouncing flesh trapped in leather. She was disappointed when the show
was over in under a minute and Misu put her robe back on and went back
to wiping down the tables.
Mousse has gotten fun for you to write, I see.
Yeah, too bad I don't know if I can get to later chapters in the manga
where I can really have some fun with him.
"Chefs have to eat some time. Isn't that right, Misu?" Ukyo asked as
the blushing waitress walked by.
Cologne sighed and ignored the following cat and mouse game that had
taken place ever since a couple of day ago when she had picked Misu off
the streets and started the girl as her waitress.
Ohhh. Ukyou and 'Misu'? This is gonna be good. ^_^
Just a small scene showing Ukyo as a playboy, er girl.
"I understand, Ranma. Now, let's slow down. We can't just go running
all over the place. My place isn't too far from here. The walls are a
bit thin though, so maybe we could to go a little hotel I know that's
not too far from my restaurant. We'll have to stop by my place to get
my toys though."
Heh. I think I like this version of Ukyou. ^_^
Thanks, she's the only other one other than Ranma that I changed
_drastically_ and I was hoping I pulled it off.
Ukyo giggled as everyone crowded around her asking her about Ranma.
Overnight, she had become the most popular girl in the playground. Too
bad she had to leave in the middle of the night. Parents didn't seem to
like to go to their okonomiyaki yatai anymore when boys started playing
marriage with boys and girls with girls after hearing about her
engagement with a soon-to-be girl.
Hehehehehe. Oh that is rich.
Heh, she wasn't rejected in this timeline so her whole background
changes.
"Did I say nights? I meant that 'night'. Hehehe," Ukyo laughed
unconvincingly.
Very wicked. A very unusual twist to Ukyou, but its appropriate given the
nature of this fic. ^_^
Good, hoping it would work out that way when I designed her new
character :P
"I don't think you should worry about Kodachi. I'm sure it was all a
misunderstanding," Ranma said soothingly.
"Oh?"
Ranma: She's my bitch now.
Kodachi: Woof.
<Slap>
Ranma blinked as she suddenly found herself with the flat of her hand
slapped against Ukyo's face. "Ucchan! I'm sorry. I don't know what
happened. One moment I was, um, enjoying myself and the next minute, I
heard you use the male version of 'I' and then whammo."
Heh. This is a nice angle. One I wouldn't have thought of.
Didn't either until actually started to write Ukyo in. So I thought it
might be a little jarring.
"A cute little redhead," Ukyo whispered mysteriously.
"Redhead... die!"
Heh. And so it begins again
Was there any doubt?
"I have no problems with that. I don't mind being a mistress. Problem
solved. Good night."
The path of least resistance indeed.
to greatest pleasure :P
"Ah," Ranma sighed, defeated. She really should have paid more
attention to her father when he taught her the joys and rewards of
lying. She looked up and saw that even Kasumi wore a disappointed
look. "Punish me."
Ohhh. This should be fun.
Well for Nabiki at least.
Nabiki: oh, come off it, Ranma too.
Ranma: ...
Still managing to keep it amusing. I'm just curious as to how much longer
it can last, though. Worth the time to C+C though. No question about that.
No idea myself. Prolly lost more than half the readers for this
compared to when I first started :P
But will continue to write as long as I get comments and it's fun.
D.B. Sommer