Jerico Mele wrote:
Re: [FFML] [Fanfic][TM!] Vacation Days chapter 5
by: DB Sommer (sommer@3rdm.net)
Comments: I like this series. I'm one of those people who happen to
think that Mihoshi (OAV Mihoshi anyway) is a hidden genius,
Heh. I liked Lurker's description of a 'bubblehead with a sharp eye for
detail
and an analytical mind... a living oxymoron, but that's Mihoshi for you,'
myself.
and the
characterization of Mihoshi in this series is right along those lines.
Thanks.
(Note: when I say hidden genius, I mean hidden from Mihoshi too).
Of course. She wouldn't be have as fun if she turned into another Washuu.
^_^
Characterization is good (Tenchi's ettchi voice is a nice addition)
Thanks again. I was a little wary of adding it, thinking it might be a tad
too silly, but so far there's been only compliments and no complaints.
and
the author created characters all fit in well.
Thanks again. Since they do take up about half the fic, it's reassuring to
hear they aren't bogging things down, despite a lack of familiarity the
readers have with what is essentially an original cast.
A bit of plot
transparency is fine, too.
I'm not good enough to keep everything hidden.
Definately looking forward to the next
episode.
Recommended
Thanks for the comments.
D.B. Sommer