Ronny Hedin wrote:
Dream Eater
Very nice Krista. Very compelling.
I will follow this series.
Thanks, Andrew. ^_^
Wot the man said. Looks good so far; looking forward to seeing this
continued. I was getting bored of HoI towards later chapters
anyway. *runs to escape the fury of the masses*
<gasp> Blasphemer! ;-)
Couldn't find much to complain about yet, except that I find it a
bit uneccesary to use "Sayonara" rather than "Farewell" or whatever
(when Genma leaves).
Well, that's because Sayonara doesn't really translate properly to
"farewell." It's my understanding that people only say "sayonara" when
they never expect to see that person again. Otherwise, you're right,
"farewell" would have sufficed... under other circumstances.
Also, I don't quite like having an Akane who's already grown into
"determined she wants Ranma" without any details on the process of
how it happened beyond "x months pass", but I guess there's no way
around that that wouldn't mean spending a lot of time on things that
shouldn't be spent time on. The whole "Ranma is gone, and now Akane
is dead set on getting him back, and everyone forms a truce, etc
etc" bit *does* feel a bit cliched, but maybe that's just me.
Yup, I did that intentionally, actually. The "R&A Get Together" story
has been told so many times, if I wrote a back-story to this, it would
probably be redundant and screamingly cliche. Besides, that's not the
story I'm telling here. (Besides, my version of "R&A Get Together" is
HoI. ^_^) If I started this story any earlier, it would be a different
story altogether. So in other words, why don't I explain how R&A ended
up together? Because in this instance, I don't really care. ^_^ It's
not necessary to the story. If that makes any sense... ^^;;;
Anyway, thanks for the comments! ^_^
Krista