Besides the usual, great job A few questions struck me...
IF I was in Nabs shoes, I would ask myself, did Ranma leave of his own free
will?
(Let's see, no note, no items taken, that would make me wonder really
quickly... Esp since he'd MADE his choice...)
Also why at THIS point did the dream eater come?
Andrew



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