At 08:30 PM 24/11/1999 , andrew norris wrote:
Besides the usual, great job A few questions struck me...
IF I was in Nabs shoes, I would ask myself, did Ranma leave of his own free
will?
Considering that Ranma "left" ALL his stuff behind, I don't think that
question ever crossed her mind.
(Let's see, no note, no items taken, that would make me wonder really
quickly... Esp since he'd MADE his choice...)
Also why at THIS point did the dream eater come?
That would be my question as well.
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