Dream Eater
Very nice Krista. Very compelling.
I will follow this series.
Wot the man said. Looks good so far; looking forward to seeing this
continued. I was getting bored of HoI towards later chapters
anyway. *runs to escape the fury of the masses*
Couldn't find much to complain about yet, except that I find it a
bit uneccesary to use "Sayonara" rather than "Farewell" or whatever
(when Genma leaves).
Also, I don't quite like having an Akane who's already grown into
"determined she wants Ranma" without any details on the process of
how it happened beyond "x months pass", but I guess there's no way
around that that wouldn't mean spending a lot of time on things that
shouldn't be spent time on. The whole "Ranma is gone, and now Akane
is dead set on getting him back, and everyone forms a truce, etc
etc" bit *does* feel a bit cliched, but maybe that's just me.
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Ronny Hedin, thark@mangakai.org, http://i99ronhe.island.liu.se/
"Baka baka, minna baka." -Hoshino Ruri, Nadesico
"Remember, there are no stupid questions, just stupid people."