Well, here I go again.
Re:[FFML] [fic][Eva][Alteverse] Project: Proteus--Episode 1 & 2
by: Sparky Clarkson (sparkster@writeme.com)
Comments: Characterization is a little flakey, but the central premise
is really interesting. The synchronization scene was awfully graphic,
but the Proteus system seems like a real piece of work. A couple of
problems I had, mostly just stylistically: I'd start the series off with
some sort of action, just to provide Shinji with more of a reason to
climb into the sphere. As you remember from Episode 1 of the TV series,
it took a beaten and battered Rei to get Shinji in the Eva. Second: are
you going to be using Angels as the bad guys? It doesn't seem that way,
and I personally feel that's for the best, since Eva and Angel are so
interconnected in the series.
Recommended for Eva fans
Re: [FFML] [Fanfic][TM!] Vacation Days chapter 5
by: DB Sommer (sommer@3rdm.net)
Comments: I like this series. I'm one of those people who happen to
think that Mihoshi (OAV Mihoshi anyway) is a hidden genius, and the
characterization of Mihoshi in this series is right along those lines.
(Note: when I say hidden genius, I mean hidden from Mihoshi too).
Characterization is good (Tenchi's ettchi voice is a nice addition) and
the author created characters all fit in well. A bit of plot
transparency is fine, too. Definately looking forward to the next
episode.
Recommended
Re:[FFML] [EVA][Fanfic] HERZ Part 9: They that Overcometh/I Will
By Toh Ee Loong(teloong@cwcom.net)
Comments: Good, as always. Didn't expect to see Kaji back though. More
plotting (which is always good) and more of Hikari's work, which I find
remarkably interesting.
Highly Recommended
Re: [FFML] [FFML][What other series do I write?][Dark (for once)]
[character sketch] Alone
By: Murasaki Kaze(muteki@juno.com)
Comments: A well written tale, if a bit obtuse at times. I had a tough
time figuring out exactly what happened to who, though I liked the way
everyone was portrayed.
Recommended for introspection/Slayers fans
Re:[FFML] [FANFIC] Self Insert Hunter (1/2)
By: Myungsu Suh (wx721@netcom.com)
Comments: Vaugely reminded me of Magical Girl Hunters in general premise
(though much, much, much less Tarentino-esque) handled differently in
terms of writing and plot. I like this a great deal, and I'm happy
everyone forgot about my SI series.
Recommended
Re: [FFML] [one shot] [eva] Racing Hearts AND [FFML] [one shot] [eva]
Cold (revised)
By: Dreiser1@ix.netcom.com
Comments: I'm reviewing these two because they share a theme and author.
First let me say I really liked both these. Alot. They were written
excellently, in character, well set up in terms of formatting and I like
the Rei/Asuka pairing(*tears gaze away from wall scroll*). I'm
definately going to put these two gems into my HD archives.
Highly Recommended!
Thats all for now,
Jerico
(slowest C&Cer in all the Land)