Yay! It's about time we got to see more of this.
Akane only a couple of seconds to close the distance between them, but
once she reached her father-in-law she
law, she ( I think)
Ranma's grin got even wider when Akane kissed Genma's cheek before she
let him go.
Ranma: Eww. Now her lips touched pop. I can't never kiss her again.
Nabiki was sitting at the table, sipping a cup of tea. When she saw
her sister, she jumped up and hugged her.
Nabiki: Sisterly affection will only cost you 500 yen tonight. I'm worried
about Kasumi too.
The sisters held each other
for quite a while, and when they let go both
go, both
"How much did Saotome tell you when he phoned?"
Akane: Not much. He just kept going 'grumph, grumph'. It would have helped
if he hadn't been a panda when he called.
Tofu nodded. "Agreed. I'm going to make arrangements to move back to
Nerima as soon as I can. No one is ever going to touch my Kasumi
again."
Well, that takes care of that.
Wait, I've read WUE. Tofu's really a bad guy. Are you sure you want to do
this, Kara? ^_^
*My Kasumi,* thought Ranma.
Akane picked up on the thought, as all married women can with their spouces
(just ask them) and bashed him in the head with a vase.
*Just the way I think about my
Akane...only Tofu can say it out loud better than I can.*
Yeah, but Ranma's having sex with Akane, so he's still ahead on points.
Akane had been quietly observing the back and forth between
forth exchange between
"Look, I don't know where he is because it's none of my business! Why
should Shiro tell us where he went on his honeymoon?"
Mousse let go, and the student fell to the floor. The word
"honeymoon" had succeeded in hurting him more than a physical blow.
Shiro had stolen Shampoo from him.
Okay, I think this means either they permentaly wipe out Mousse's memory,
or he's going to have to be put down.
Akane nodded. She didn't want to admit that she was shivering because
of her fear that Mousse would harm her sister. Ranma retrieved her
clothes and handed
clothes, handed (you have an 'and' later in the sentence.)
Ranma nodded. "Me too, but I get the idea he won't be back in Nerima
any time soon. He's not stupid. He's got to know the police are
after him. He might not care about that, but he'd be an idiot if he
didn't know WE were after him."
It hasn't occurred to them that his real goal is to find Shampoo and that
she shouldn't be warned?
"Yes, Ranma. But I don't know where she is right now. Do you?"
"No."
Oh, well that makes sense as to not warning them then.
"Perhaps. Perhaps not. He should know that he won't be welcome. But
China is his home, and his first instinct was to return there. I
believe he was angry, and also frightened. By the time he reaches
China he'll have had time to calm down and think.
It would be a first if he did.
Shiro had told Shampoo that this house had belonged to his family for
many years, and that some of his earliest memories had been of
vacations on the beach. He'd spoken to her of his desire to bring
here there in the summertime, but Shampoo had shaken her head. She
was too afraid of getting wet and changing into a cat amidst a crowd
of beachgoers.
She wasn't afraid before during both the cat fist storyline and the magic
pill one.
The cast came out for several curtain calls after the final
performance. When the curtain came down for what seemed to be the
last time, Ranma came down
two 'came down's in the same sentence. I'd change the first one to
'When the curtain was lowered
The more he thought, the longer the list became.
For his sake, Pantyhose Tarou better not be near the top of the list, or
his dreams of vengence would end before they had begun. ^_^
Ryoga looked at his feet, and twiddled his fingers.
"How's Ranma?"
Akane: He's great in bed. Why do you ask?
"I have learned to cook, Ryoga! You don't need to be afraid to eat
it."
When has Ryouga ever demonstrated fear at eating Akane's cooking? Even when
he knew it was bad, he'd eat it.
"Yeah. Hi Ryoga."
Hi, Ryouga
"Hi Ranma.
Hi, Ranma
What Nodoka didn't say was that she'd obtained permission from the
doctor to take Ukyo out any time she chose. The only reason she was
delaying was that she had to find a day when Ranma would be home, but
his wife would not. Bringing Ukyo to see Ranma when Akane was around
was not part of the plan.
What a devious woman good ole No-chan is proving to be.
Nice work that ended too soon. So get cracking on the next chapter already.
^_^
D.B. Sommer