Subject: [FFML] [FFML][R1/2][AltUni][Repost/Corrections] Ranma and Nabiki 1/2 Chapter 2
From: RanmaSolo@aol.com
Date: 11/20/1999, 9:22 AM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

Again I must thank CCMax. The help was invaluable!


Disclaimer - I don't own the copyrighted characters in this story. Any new 
characters though are mine.

Content - Uh, just to be cautious there are sexual references in the story.


    Every nerve in Ranma's body screamed at him in a twisted symphony of
 pain. His every thought was the same.

    *Gotta protect Nabiki! Gotta protect Nabiki! Gotta protect Nabiki!*

    Nabiki was cowering under Ranma, who was physically shielding her with
 his body. He could feel her body shaking with the same fear that threatened 
to
 take him. He could just make out the horrid sound of her muffled sobs of pain
 and fear over the rising din of starving, viscous cats.

    *Gotta protect Nabiki! Gotta protect Nabiki! Gotta protect Nabiki!*

    The claws ripped at his flesh and the teeth sank into it. The darkness
 blinded him. It made it seem as if there was no hope for him. But he knew no
 matter what he had to keep Nabiki safe. So, he couldn't give in to the silent
 urge he felt. He had no idea what it was.

    *Gotta protect Nabiki! Gotta protect Nabiki! Gotta protect Nabiki!*

    Suddenly he received clarity. He knew, he _knew_ that this urge,
 whatever it may be, would protect Nabiki if he gave into it. That's all he 
had
 to do and his objective would be complete. He could then and only then give 
in
 to the utter horror of the situation.

    As Ranma gave up his silent battle, Nabiki barely felt his stance
 changing. So subtle was it that if she were not a martial artist she knew 
that
 she wouldn't have recognized it. Especially not in her current situation.

    As suddenly as the waking nightmare had begun, it ended.  Ranma, who was
 carrying Nabiki by the back of her shirt haphazardly with his teeth, leapt up
 and out of their mock prison, which was (in actuality) nothing more than a
 simple pit dug into the ground with a wooden board for a roof placed on top 
of
 it.  As Ranma landed and set Nabiki down, his father, Genma, looked at him
 proudly.  "I knew you could do it, Ranma!  You've learned the Neko-ken!"

    Ranma watched but felt as if he weren't really there. Like he was more
 of a spectator watching a movie through the eyes of the of lead actor. But 
this
 was no movie and so he quickly became panicked. His panic turned into 
complete
 terror as Nabiki patted him on a head and said, "Yes, Ranma, you're such a 
good
 kitty. You learned the Neko-ken and freed me at the same time."

    *No! No! I'm not a cat! I'm just acting like one! I'm still human!
 Please!*


     Nabiki and Ranma 1/2 Part 2 
        By: Mike Malaspina


    "Ranma! Ranma! Wake up!" Nabiki exclaimed, shaking her fiance with vigor
 knowing full well the horror he was going through. She too had nightmares 
about
 much of the training Genma had put them through, but nothing as bad as Ranma
 who had them almost nightly. And tonight seemed to be one of the worse ones.

    "..no.... no.. 'm not a c..... ust ac...... 'm sti.... hum.... ple..."
 muttered Ranma in his slumber. "NOOOOOOOOOOO!" he screamed as he shot up, 
fear
 in his eyes and sweat drenching his entire body. When he saw Nabiki next to
 him, concern etched in her deep brown eyes, he fell into her embrace and 
cried
 upon her shoulder. Nabiki gently rocked him and murmured him assurances that
 everything was all right.

                        --------------------

    The door suddenly flew open, a light came on and Soun Tendo and two of
 his daughters, the youngest and oldest, burst into the room. "What's wrong? 
Is
 everything all right?" asked Soun carefully eyeing every detail of the room
 searching for any sign of something wrong.

    "We heard a shout.. What's going on?" Akane asked next also looking
 around the room for any sign of perhaps an intruder.

    "Oh my! You really shouldn't be sleeping together before you're married
 Nabiki." Said Kasumi.

    "We already are Kasumi," replied Nabiki, quickly returning her attentions
 to Ranma who was too out of it, still hadn't noticed the intrusion.

    "Oh, well then... Oh my!" she exclaimed noticing the crying Ranma, "Is
 Ranma all right?"

    "Yes, he'll be fine," she started before turning back to Ranma. "Shhh..
 It's Okay, Ranma, I'm right here. It's Okay.." She turned back to her 
gathered
 family. "Ranma, has nightmares about some of the very bad things that have
 happened to us on our training journey. Sometimes they're very.." she again 
had
 to turn back to Ranma, "its Okay, Ranma. It's Okay. Shhh.. I've got you. 
It's all
 right," she once again turned back. "Sometimes they're very bad and this is
 what happens. Why don't you all go back to bed? I can handle this fine by
 myself."

    Soun, who had started crying and whining about "My poor little girl!"
 when Nabiki had said 'us' after 'bad things' and 'that have happened to,' 
suddenly
 stopped and looked sternly at his middle daughter.

    "Are you sure you're both all right and you can handle this?"

    "Yes, I'm sure Daddy."

    "Okay then. Girls, let's go back to bed and let Nabiki take care of her
 fiance," Soun said, turning to his other daughters and ushering them out of 
the
 room Nabiki and Ranma shared. He shot one last glance of concern towards 
Nabiki
 and left also. 

                        --------------------

    *They are already?* Kasumi thought for a second as she paused outside
 her door. "I'll have to ask Nabiki about that tomorrow."

                        --------------------

    *At least Ranma won't remember them being here. I don't think he would
 notice a train going by when he wakes up from those damned nightmares.* 
Nabiki
 sighed and thought back over the days events, after she had explained 
Jusenkyo
 to her father, that had led up till now.

                        --------------------

    "Now that we've got that figured out, Daddy, what about sleeping
 arrangements?" questioned Nabiki.

    "Well, that's easy, you can have your old room and Ranma and Genma can
 sleep in the guest room," replied Soun.

    Nabiki sighed. *This should be easy but I have a bad feeling.*

    She had just finished explaining Jusenkyo after her father's faintings
 and her own had subsided and she was already going to have to deal with 
another
 mess Genma had gotten them in. "Uh, Father, what would you say to... uh, 
well,
 Ranma and I... sharing a room?"

    "WHAT?!" screamed Soun in full Demon head mode. "If Ranma's taken
 advantage of my little girl so help me I'll..! I'll...!"

    As Soun searched his mind for something suitable, Nabiki interrupted him,
 "Daddy, Ranma did no such thing! We... sorta got married already."

    "What?! How could you Nabiki? Why, oh why, has my little girl deprived
 her father the pleasure of being at her wedding!" shouted Soun as he began to
 wail.

    *I knew I had a bad feeling about this.*

    "Daddy! Get a hold of yourself. We _had_ to and it was a ceremony just
 to make it official. We plan on having another wedding right here," Nabiki
 quickly said, trying to cut down one the water damage bills.

    "Oh. Why did you _have_ to get married?"

    Nabiki sighed as she launched into her story, "The reason is that
 shortly after Jusenkyo we sort of ran Mr. Saotome off. Well, Ranma did 
anyway.
 And when Ranma finally cooled down we went looking for him and found him in 
an
 Amazon village."

    "Why was Genma running from Ranma?" asked Soun, looking bewildered.

    "Mr. Saotome, who already insulted Ranma way too much about him being
 soft, had just turned him into a girl."

    "Ah, the life of a true martial artist _is_ fraught with many perils."

    "Yes, as I was saying though, we found him in a remote village of
 Chinese Amazons where he was caged in panda form."

    "How did you recognize him?"

    "If it weren't for his glasses we wouldn't have. But we did and were
 able to save him from a grisly fate as a main course for an upcoming feast," 
as
 Nabiki said this Soun's eyes bulged. "We did so by telling the villagers that
 he was a human who was Jusenkyo cursed. We ended up becoming guests of the
 Amazons when Ranma, female at the time, and I were able to defeat the 
village's
 two best martial artists in a duel for Genma's life."

    "Nabiki, why was his life at stake?"

    "He ate the village champion's victory feast."

    "Genma hasn't changed much has he?" Soun asked rhetorically.

    "Yes, I think Ranma and I were very lucky that day though."

    "Why is that, my daughter?"

    "Well, I already explained the Neko-ken to you in a letter so I won't
 waste time retelling that. But what I will say is that the only reason we
 weren't killed after the fight, I believe, is because Ranma went into the
 Neko-ken when my fight started to turn ugly and against me."

    "That's right. You said two things activate the Cat Fist. Cats and Ranma
 perceiving you to be in being in serious, immediate danger. Correct?" stated
 Soun.

    "Yeah, and when the Elder Cologne," Soun looked at Nabiki strangely at
 the mention of the Amazon elder's name, "saw and recognized what it was, she
 halted the fight immediately and welcomed us to her village. After I calmed
 Ranma down, the Elder, Ranma and myself had a very interesting conversation. 
As
 a result of that we ended up guests of the tribe and she also offered to 
train
 us. Ranma accepted right away and I'm glad he did even though there were some
 strings attached."

    "Uh, Nabiki if you don't mind me interrupting, this is all very
 fascinating but what does it have to do with why you _had_ to get married?"
 asked Soun sounding perfectly calm, even though most would be getting 
impatient
 by now.

    "I'm just getting to that part, Daddy," said Nabiki getting a little
 impatient, being one of the most that would be getting impatient by now. 
"The 
 strings that were attached to the training were that Ranma and I become 
members 
 of the tribe. Unfortunately since Ranma was really a man only I could join
 without marrying into the tribe but Cologne offered to train him anyway as 
long
 as he was married to an Amazon. So, I became an Amazon, Ranma married me and 
we
 got extensive training for ten months."

    "Ah, I see. In that case you were just doing it to further yourselves in
 the art. I see nothing wrong with that then," said Soun, looking very wise as
 he nodded to himself.

    "Thank you, Daddy," said Nabiki. "Does this mean Ranma and I can share a
 room?"

    "I don't see why not as long as I get to start planning your _real_
 wedding right away."

    "Fine by me. But could you make it something sort of short? The Amazon
 wedding may have been just a formality but it was a very long one," stated
 Nabiki sounding as if she was still tired from said wedding.

    "Well, I've heard that Western style weddings aren't too long."

    "Sounds good. I always liked their wedding gowns."

    "Then it's all decided?"

    "Mm hmm. You can plan the wedding but nothing too extravagant or long,
 Daddy"

    "Of course nothing _too_ extravagant. I'm not rich after all."

    "Yes, perhaps I should pay for my own dress then. I'm sure I could get
 enough money for something very nice together in a week or so."

    Soun big sweated as a predatory grin rolled across Nabiki's face.

                        --------------------

    When Nabiki had finished talking with Soun, she joined Akane in the dojo.
 Said Tendo sister was busy destroying bricks. Nabiki silently watched from 
the
 door as Akane slowly breathed in and out, concentrated and finally lashed out
 with extreme prejudice at the brick. It shattered into tiny chunks that 
joined
 many other of their brethren on the floor. Akane let out her breath and 
picked
 up a towel. As she dabbed at her forehead she turned to find Nabiki clapping
 and smiling in the doorway.

    "Bravo Akane. Very nice form," said Nabiki who was truly impressed with
 her little sister. She was great for the amount of training she had gotten. 
She
 only knew an estimate but even if she had more than what Nabiki understood 
she
 did, she was very good.

    "Thanks. Would you like to do a little sparring?" asked Akane, hoping
 that her sister would. She still didn't know whether or not her sister was
 better than she was and she really wanted her to not be. So, she figured she
 should find out and get over it that much quicker if Nabiki did turn out 
better
 than her.

    "Sure."

    Akane smiled and as she cleared away the bricks Nabiki entered to the
 center of the dojo. Akane stood across from her in a ready stance. Nabiki 
held
 a half-ready stance but looked very relaxed. Akane looked worried as she
 thought, *What's she doing? She's not even in a proper stance!* Akane 
shouted,
 "Ready, set, go," and began with a rapid punch combo. She was stupefied to 
find
 Nabiki blocking each one half way to its target. She must have been in shock
 because next thing she knew, Nabiki was standing over her with worry clear on
 her face.

    "Akane! Akane, are you all right? Did I hurt you? Speak to me!" said
 Nabiki, who was holding Akane up and shaking her shoulder.

    "Oohhh... What happened?" croaked Akane.

    "You suddenly stopped after your combo and I landed a kick in your right
 side. You really should have been able to block that."

    "I.. I know. I was just.. surprised that you were able to block my
 punches."

    "Why?"

    "Well, the way you were standing I didn't think you'd be able to block
 my punches so effectively."

    "Oh, that's a little something Ranma thought up. If you don't look ready
 when your opponent attacks he won't think you're ready. It surprises them and
 you have a quick advantage. You should work on doing that yourself. Its very
 effective."

    Akane rubbed her right side as she said, "I can tell. But I think I will
 try that. You know Nabiki you're really good."

    "So are you."

    "I know I am, but you.. You're amazing. No one has ever beaten me
 before. And I have to say I'm really glad that it was you and not Ranma."

    "You have something against Ranma?" asked Nabiki taking a defensive
 tone.

    "No, I don't know him well enough yet. I'm just glad that my first loss
 was to a girl."

    "There something wrong with guys?"

    "Nothing really. It's just that they're always so snotty when they fight
 me. They act like just because I'm a girl I can't fight!"

    Nabiki thought for a moment and decided she too was glad she had beat
 Akane and not Ranma. The vehemence with which Akane insulted boys in general
 bordered on psychotic hatred. "Oh, well, maybe it was a good thing I fought 
you
 first. Ranma tries his best not to hit girls when he can avoid it, and I'm 
sure
 that would have caused quite the scene."

    "Yeah."

    After almost a minute of silence Nabiki cleared her throat. "You know
 Akane, if you want, you could train with me and Ranma. I'm sure we could 
help you
 improve tremendously."

    "Really? You'd help train me?"

    "Not just me, but Ranma too."

    "Wow, I'd love that, Sis."

    "Well, then how about we start tomorrow?"

    "Okay."

    "But now I'm going to go take a bath."

    "Okay, enjoy yourself. I'll be in here if you want me."

                        --------------------

    "Who thought a simple furo could feel so good?" said Ranma aloud. He
 leaned back and remembered a few of the times he really could have used one 
out
 on the road with Pops and his Fiancee. *I wish Nab-chan were here to share 
this
 with me.*

    As the door to the bathroom from the changing room slid open Ranma
 looked over to see Nabiki entering. "Well, ask and you shall receive."

    "What's that, Ranma?"

    "Just before you came in, I was wishing that you were here to share the
 furo with me."

    "Well, then you're lucky that it _was_ me Ranma. You forgot the sign,"
 said Nabiki, smirking and holding up the forgotten sign.

    "Whoops.."

    "Yeah, whoops. Imagine the scene if Akane or Kasumi had walked in on
 you," said Nabiki as she hung the sign and closed the door.

    "I'd much rather that I didn't," said Ranma, wincing.

    Nabiki sat down on her stool and began to soap up as Ranma once again
 leaned back and closed his eyes. Nabiki dumped a bucket of cold water over 
her
 head to rinse off, shivering at the temperature. He hurriedly walked over to
 the furo and slid in next to his fiance. She put an arm around him and Ranma
 returned the favor. They began to snuggle up to each other when the door
 suddenly opened. They both shot looks at the door, Nabiki covering her upper
 extremities with her free arm.

    "I'm sorry, I thought you were done Nabi.. Eep!" Akane blanched as she
 saw Ranma in the furo with her sister. "I'm sooo sorry! I'll be going now!"
 exclaimed Akane quickly turning, sliding the door shut firmly and thanking 
the
 kami she had been wearing that towel.

    "Nabiki, you wanna get out?"

    "Well, I would enjoy a nice long soak with you but we should let Akane
 have the bath. She's been working out, dinner's almost ready and I'm sure 
she'd
 like to wash up beforehand." Said Nabiki, disappointed that she wouldn't be
 spending much private time with Ranma until later that night.

    As Ranma stood up, he offered Nabiki his hand. "May I?" he asked in a
 very formal tone.

    "Of course you can my darling." Said Nabiki, playing along. He pulled
 her up as they shared a laugh and began to dry off.

                        --------------------

    At the dinner table Ranma sat close to Nabiki while Genma sat, at a
 farther distance, on his other side. Soun sat at the head of the table and
 Akane and Kasumi were across from Ranma, Nabiki and Genma. As they ate 
quietly,
 Soun decided to start up a conversation. "Nabiki, why don't you tell us more
 about these Amazons?" he asked.

    "All right, Daddy," she started, "first, there's Cologne. She's the
 village elder who trained us and accepted me into the tribe. I had to pass a
 series of tests usually reserved for Amazons wanting to be warriors of the
 tribe to prove my worth first. She said I did better than most Amazons who 
took
 the test and so she adopted me as her great granddaughter."

    "What!? Oh, no! My little girl only came home to tell me that she's no
 longer my little girl! She's not..WAAAAHHH!" before Soun could continue, he
 broke into incomprehensible crying. Nabiki big sweated, while Ranma and even
 Genma stopped eating to do the same.

    "Daddy, don't be absurd! I'll always be your little girl. Just now I 
 have a second family," said Nabiki.

    Soun suddenly stopped and looked at Nabiki, "Oh." Soun didn't say
 anything else, but as he started to smile it was easy to tell he was 
ecstatic.

    "Now as I was saying, Cologne adopted me into her family, and to make
 Ranma an Amazon, he, as an outsider male, defeated me in combat," said Nabiki
 before being interrupted by Akane.

    "What? You mean he had to beat you up to marry you?" asked Akane, a
 puzzled angry look on her face.

    "Not exactly. By Amazon law any outsider male that defeats an Amazon
 must marry her. An outsider female is another case though. The Amazon has two
 choices. One marry her or two kill her," said Nabiki casually. Akane looked
 faint.

    Kasumi's brow furrowed, "It's quite rude to kill someone just because
 they defeated you."

    Akane looked at her oldest sister and somehow her eyes got wider. She
 mouthed 'kill' as if just hearing that part.

    Nabiki nodded. "I know, Kasumi. But the law is standard stuff for tribes
 that still live as primitive as the Amazons do. It's very rare though that,
 that particular law ever comes into play so it's not as bad as it sounds."

    Kasumi was smiling again, "Oh, that's good. Why don't you continue your
 story now?"

    Akane went further into shock when the implications of the fact that the
 law about killing outsider females rarely being brought into play kicked in.

    "All right Kasumi. I already told you all that Ranma and I beat the
 village's best martial artists, Mousse and Shampoo, to prove we were worth 
not
 just killing, what I didn't mention is that Shampoo is also Cologne's great
 granddaughter. At first she was rather stuck up to Ranma and me but as she 
got
 to know us she and I became great friends. She's more like a real sister
 actually. She and Ranma became friends too, but Ranma spent more time with
 Mousse or hanging out around Cologne trying to pick up some extra lessons.
 Ranma?" asked Nabiki interrupting herself. Ranma was too busy eating, and not
 listening, to hear her.

    She asked again, "Ranma?" Still he didn't stop eating.

    "Ranma!" yelled Nabiki as she waved a hand in front of his face. He
 looked up and around startled.

    "Huh? Oh, um, what is it Nabiki?" he asked.

    "Ranma, I was telling them a little about Shampoo and Mousse and wanted
 to know if you'd mastered the Weaponspace technique Mousse showed you, yet?" 
she
 said, asking her question.

    "Oh, almost."

    Going back to eating, Ranma noticed that his portions had gotten smaller.
 His head quickly snapped over to look at his father's plate where he saw a 
large
 amount of food that hadn't been there before. He began to glare at Genma 
when his
 old man grabbed a glass of water and doused himself. He rolled on his back 
and
 began playing with a beach ball. Wondering where that had  come from was the
 farthest thing from Ranma's mind when Genma-panda held up a sign with barely 
legible
 writing on it.

    #Why are you looking at me like that? I'm just an innocent widdle
 panda.#

    Soun and Akane big sweated as Ranma stood up and punted the panda and
 ball into the backyard. A splash and 'growf' later a sopping wet Genma-panda
 was at the door. He started to come in but Kasumi interjected.

    "Ah ah, Mr. Saotome. I just cleaned the floors earlier today. You'll
 have to wait outside until you dry off," said Kasumi, apologetic but firm.

    Genma looked as disappointed as a panda could when Ranma shrugged and
 dumped the contents of Genma's plate onto his own and smirked, "Can't let it 
go
 to waste now can we, Pops?"

    As Ranma began to eat, Nabiki started again.

    "Where was I?"

    "Shampoo," supplied Kasumi helpfully.

    "Ah, yes. Shampoo, is a little fast with the bonbori but once you get to
 know her, she's very nice. Mousse thought Ranma was after Shampoo and was 
rather
 hostile to Ranma at first. Once we were married he saw that Ranma and I were
 both very much in love with each other and he and Ranma became good friends.
 Mousse is an all right guy, but a little too obsessive in his pursuits. He's
 absolutely infatuated with Shampoo. I've never seen anything like it. She 
acts
 like she couldn't care less and beats him up more than she doesn't, but I 
could
 tell she cared for him," Nabiki said. Ranma now actively listening looked up 
at
 this.

    "You sure 'bout that Nabiki?" he asked, his face a mask of skepticism.

    "Oh, I'm one-hundred percent sure Ranma," said Nabiki. Ranma nodded and
 knew it was true when her 'I'd bet on it' face made an appearance.

    "As for their martial arts ability they are both great. They each gave us
 a run for our money when we fought them. Shampoo is very good with or without
 weapons while Mousse almost relies in them," Nabiki continued.

    "Yeah, but luckily for Mousse it's almost impossible to disarm him,"
 said Ranma, obviously with some first hand knowledge.

    "Why is that, Ranma?" asked Soun.

    "He can store weapons in, and pull them from, thin air. He showed me how
 but I still can't get it right yet myself," answered Ranma. The tone of his
 voice complied that the yet was just a mere formality.

    "Besides that," Nabiki began, "the only other thing to tell about the
 Amazons is the special circumstances surrounding us. Normally when outsider's
 become part of the tribe they have to stay in the village. Because we both 
had
 families outside of China they decided to let us live here in Japan, but if
 there's ever a threat to the village, we'll be summoned back to help. Also, 
if
 for some reason Shampoo isn't able to take Cologne's position as an Elder on
 the Council, Ranma and I will move to the village and I'll do it.

    "Well, that sounds like a fair deal," said Soun. "And I'd like to hear
 more about your training trip, but I am very tired all of a sudden. I'm 
going to
 retire to my room."

    "All right, Daddy, later then?" suggested Nabiki.

    "All right," said Soun as he got up and headed for his room.

    Ranma finished up his meal and went out to the dojo for a quick workout.
 Akane, Kasumi and Nabiki did a little chit chatting. Mostly about Ranma, but 
a
 little more about the Amazons. Akane kept asking if girl Amazons really 
married
 other girls. Nabiki kept saying yes. Kasumi kept frowning about the other 
half
 of the law about female outsiders defeating an Amazon.

                        --------------------

    Ranma and Nabiki were in their room, one in night gown the other in a
 pair of boxers and tank top, in bed. They silently watched each other in the
 dark. Neither said a thing but just looked into the other's eyes. They 
drifted
 off to sleep in warm, peaceful embrace that unfortunately wouldn't last 
through
 the night. The embrace yes, just not the peaceful part.



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