Subject: [FFML] Re: [Teaser][Fusion][R1/2][Xeno] Deux Ex Machina
From: AlphSailor@aol.com
Date: 11/8/1999, 11:15 PM
To: s2mlmill@titan.vcu.edu, mgerber@eyrie.org, ffml@fanfic.com


In a message dated 11/8/99 11:23:07 PM, s2mlmill@titan.vcu.edu writes:

Title should be read as, 'Deus Ex machina,' as someone had pointed out 
earlier.

Plot wise, Why on earth would Ranma be a painter? Are you intending to
completely replace his character with what's his name's? Akane as a
freedom fighter? Plausible but unlikely. Especially not as a part of a
team. Her anger would be a detriment no group could survive. Total
personnality revision in her too? If so, and I don't see any other
believable way to these changes, what remains of Ranma in it? Whats the
difference between this and Xenogears natural. Other than the names, and
that is just annoying. 

I'd have to agree with this. While I'm curious about the prospect, what 
you're doing is basically changing looks and names of some vital characters 
in Xenogears (of which I've played, BTW).

I've got an even better suggestion; try to place Ranma characters *within* 
the Xenogears storyline, but keep their personalities intact AND avoid the 
same old thing thing we've read about in TOS Ranma, such as Genma and Soun 
engaging Ranma and Akane, finacee problem, etc. You may try and keep them, 
but try to give them a twist.

You could cast Akane as a some sort of inexperienced freedom fighter, not 
affliated with either sides. She tries to steal a top-secret Gear, but 
crash-lands it in some distant region, due to her infamiliarity with most of 
its system.

Ranma, considered as one of the best Gear pilots in the world, outside of 
Solaris, stumbles upon her and the Gear, well not as much as 'stumbled upon' 
rather than being a poor target by Akane's AWOL Gear. ^_- ("Hey why don't ya 
watch where you're drivin' that thing?! Look at what you've done to my 
custom-built Gear!")

A while later, Solaris pops out of where and grabs Akane, due to her 
'exceptional skills.' As it later turned out, she has an innate ability that 
she can subconsicously call upon (i.e., her mallet if you want) without usage 
of the Drive drug.

I'm not sure of where you could go with this, but it's just a thought.


Dark Alpha <AlphSailor@aol.com>


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