Just to inform you, beef isn't exactly a delicacy
in Japan, at least for most people. Since this fanfic
takes place in post-manga, I assumed this to be 1995
or later. My family lived up to 1992 in Yokohama, in
a firm-owned 3DK apartment, and beef wasn't anything
luxurious or unaffordable.
Now, Tendo dojo isn't exactly affuluent, but I
know of no manga and only one episode in which their
economic difficulty is addressed. Therefore, I must
say
that the dish probably wouldn't be something out of
dreams for Tendos. Saotomes, on the other hand...
As for your writing and mood development skills,
it was superb, save that I could not find any reason
for Dr. Fell to actually like Akane enough to spare
her (of course, if he tried to slaughter her, he would
most probably get his butt kicked by Ranma...). Also,
these two series seem incompatible as a crossover,
since "reality level" are too different. You achieved
your purpose of spooking the readers, but it was just
a little unbelievable, you know?
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