David Johnston wrote:

Unless Professor Oak is the source of the situation.  After all there's
no reason given in the story for why Gary is doing this.  She can't
be doing for occupational access, since there are almost as many female
gym leaders as male.  In fact I thought that was the greatest weakness
of the story.  You have the twist, but it doesn't quite make sense
since her motivations remain unrevealed.

One word: Uuchan.


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