Subject: [FFML] [FFML][RANMA] The Hazards of Redemption, Chapter One
From: Valandar TheRed
Date: 10/31/1999, 12:18 PM
To: Fanfic MailingList

I know it's been a couple of days ( a long time for me), but I've had
writer's block. Also, I'll have the next chapter of The Emperor's Hand
out soon. Anyway, here's the fic. C&C greatly appreciated, Flames
greatly ignored.

Disclaimer: I haven't taken my Prozac, so be warned. Oh, 
and, by the way, this is a non-profit Fanfiction. Please 
don't sue me, Ms. Takahashi-sama!


                  Hazards of Redemption

               Chapter One: Oni the Lonely

     Hell is not the absolute monarchy most people think it 
is. Instead, it is a massive bureaucracy, with numerous 
offices and divisions, each one dedicated to dealing with a 
particular aspect of sin, temptation, or response to 
summonings. In one particular office, at the back of a very 
long line, stood Takamaru Yoshi. Needless to say, he wasn't 
too happy.

     He had been standing in line for over eight hours, and 
he seemed to be no closer to the desk, far off in the 
distance. This would not do. No, this would not do at all. 
"By the Terrace of the Mirror of the Wicked, I demand to 
reach the front of the line! I am the last scion of the 
Takamaru clan, and Master of the Black Arts!" He raised his 
hands, and summoned all of his dark power.

     Which wasn't very much. One would think that the power 
of black magic would be stronger in Hell than it was on 
Earth. Of course, it is, as long as you are either a demon, 
or alive. Yoshi was neither of these at the moment. All he 
managed to summon was a small flame on the tip of his index 
finger, which promptly snuffed out as it burned him. He 
started hooting and hollering, and leapt about like a Mexican 
jumping bean.

     After a few minutes, he finally settled down, and 
resumed his place in line. That was when a particularly large 
demon, with eight horns, reached down, and plucked him from 
his spot. "Get in the back," it growled.

     "But this is my spot!" he declared.

     "GET IN THE BACK!" roared the demon.

     Gathering his rather disheveled kimono around himself, 
Yoshi glared at the fiend, then slowly walked to the back of 
the line. The walk took him ten minutes.

     ***************************************************

     No matter where Ranma went, the stars were one of the 
few constants in his life. Some fled with the seasons, while 
others stayed where they were, but they were there, year 
after year. When he needed time alone to think, the stars 
listened, and didn't judge. They simply were there.

     Tonight's deep thoughts revolved around the Oni that was 
attempting to reform. Kenchiro, he had named it - rather, 
him. So what happens? They decide that Ken is now Ranma's 
'cousin' to the world at large. Oh, great. If Kuno hears 
about this, I'll never get him off my back.

     On the other hand, if Ken doesn't get the hang of the 
whole inner peace thing, he's likely to get rather 
frustrated. And that could mean a whole lot of trouble. So, 
perhaps it was better to try to help him out.

     The big problem was the general chaos surrounding 
Nerima. If Ken were to get caught up in the whole mess, 
things could get ugly. And, in his natural form, Ken was 
pretty ugly. That could probably trash the Oni's attempt to 
reform, if that was what he was doing, and they'd have to 
deal with one ticked off demon. Not that they couldn't, but 
the less mass destruction the better.

     Ranma was distracted by the telltale sound of a ladder 
dropping into place against the roof. Glancing over, he saw 
the short, black hair of his fiancee. That is, he saw one of 
his fiancees. It was Akane, to be precise. "Ranma, are you 
sleeping up here tonight?"

     He stayed on his back, but crossed one ankle over the 
other. "Well, where else'd I sleep? I have a new cousin, now, 
an' he's probably sharing the room with me an' Oyaji. With 
those two, there's not much room fer me, ne?"

     "Actually, he's not sleeping anywhere," she giggled.

     "Huh?"

     "Baka, he's a spirit! He doesn't need sleep. He's 
sitting by the koi pond, meditating," said Akane.

     Ranma sat up, and stretched a little. "Oh, um, okay. I, 
um, gotta get to bed them. We got school tomorrow. Um, 
they're not gonna make him come to school with us, are they?"

     Akane glared at him. "He's several thousand years old, 
to begin with, and his form, body, whatever, looks about 
thirty. He'd look funny at Furinkan, wouldn't he?"

     "Um, yeah." He looked at her, and froze. The moon was 
full, and the blue-white light was shining in Akane's eyes. 
She was half smiling at her own joke, and he didn't think he 
could breathe. "Ahh..." began Ranma.

     "Yes?" asked Akane.

     "Ahh..." he continued.

     "Well?" she demanded.

     "Ahh..."

     "Come on, what?" she growled.

     "AH-CHOO!"

     "RANMA NO BAKA!" >Blam!<

     Down below, Kenchiro the Oni glanced up at the scene 
above him. "Fascinating. I did not know the boy had enough 
mastery of his chi to fly, yet."

     ***************************************************

     In a black-curtained office, King Chuan Lun Wang, High 
Yama King of all Hell, drummed his fingers on his huge, ebony 
desk. The clicking of his metal, finely manicured talons 
echoed through the cavernous room. The only light came from 
the monitor of the computer sitting on his desk. Being Hell, 
it was only a 286, despite his lofty position. His clothing 
was fine, and without stray threads anywhere, and perfectly 
tailored for his skeletal frame. As his left hand drummed out 
its staccato beat, the right hand fiddled with the mouse on 
its Disney mouse pad.

     At the far end of the room, doors large enough to allow 
the Hindenburg through slowly cracked open. A small voice 
croaked in the shadows. "Y-you asked for m-me, your Grand 
Supreme Evil Omnipotence, sire?"

     "Yes."

     An uneasy silence filled the room. The underlit black 
skull that served as a face for King Chuan Lun Wang turned 
slowly to gaze upon the tiny imp that slowly crept in to his 
august presence. "Um, S-sire, w-what can I d-do for my mighty 
and p-powerful Master?" squeaked the imp.

     The drumming of the fingernails stopped. That hand 
slowly left the table, and dipped gently into a large bowl on 
one corner of his desk. Withdrawing translucent, writhing 
shapes, he placed them in his fanged mouth, and slowly 
chewed. He swallowed, then spoke with the dusty voice of the 
grave. "One of our number has decided to leave us."

     "Sire?" The imp could not believe he had heard the High 
Yama King correctly.

     "He was in the Department of Vengeful Summonings. His 
mortal master died most untimely, thus negating part, but not 
all, of the reason for his summons. With an open ended 
contract, rather than taking advantage of it, he decided to 
attempt to reach something called 'inner peace'. This must 
not be." King Chuan Lun Wang reached into the bowl again, 
bringing out more of the squirming contents. "Find the mortal 
known as Takamaru Yoshi. He will be in the line at office 
number 547B. Bring him here."

     The imp snapped to attention. "At once, Master!"

     Motioning at the bowl, the High Yama King continued. 
"Also, bring me some more of these mortal delicacies. Gummi 
worms, I believe they're called."

     ***************************************************

     >Splash!<

     "So, does this conflict occur every morning?" asked 
Kenchiro, as he sat just inside the dining room.

     "Growf!" Genma held up a sign, saying, 'Of course! The 
boy's gotta train!'

     Ranma, still in male form, punted the panda back into 
the koi pond. "Seems ta me that you're so outta shape, you 
gotta train s'more, too!" A paw reached out, and snagged the 
young man's red shirt, tossing him in as well. "Glarble!" was 
all he could manage to say in protest, since his head had 
gotten stuck in the soft mud at the bottom of the pool.

     "Breakfast is ready!" called Kasumi. 

     Genma hopped out of the pond, dragging Ranma out along 
with him. It wasn't intentional, however; one of his claws 
was still stuck in his son, er, daughter's shirt. The two 
almost reached the table, when Kenchiro stopped them. "For 
the sake of my sensei, I must insist that the two of you 
clean up first."

     "Guuhr?" Genma noticed the pigtailed martial artist 
dangling from one of his claws, and shook her off. She landed 
with a rather wet 'splut'.

     Wiping the mud off her face, Ranma-chan glared up at her 
father. "An' I got first dibs on the furo!" she exclaimed, 
completely clearing the dinner table and those at it, landing 
on the stairs already running.

     By the time Genma had gotten cleaned up, turned human, 
and gotten downstairs, there wasn't much left for him to eat. 
Grumbling to himself, he devoured what was left, as Ranma and 
Akane raced off to school.

     "Oh, Kenchiro-san, they forgot their lunches again. Would 
you take them to them?" asked Kasumi.

     "Of course, sensei. Where are they going?" said the Oni. 
In a few minutes, the demon was on his way to Furinkan High 
School, and the start of a really bad day for many students 
there.



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- Valandar the Red of the Empty Tankard
Captain of the Guard of the Barony of the Far Woods
                              Empire of the Iron Mountains

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