From: allyn yonge <ayonge@yahoo.com>
To: Ken Brockwell <rolothamasi@hotmail.com>, ffml@fanfic.com
Subject: [FFML] Re: [apology]Sorry for 'Porn Star'
Date: Tue, 26 Oct 1999 04:35:59 -0700 (PDT)

HI,
1) No apology necessary.(Heck, if you have to
apologize for _THIS_ there are a LOT of writers who'd
have to commit seppuku.)

2)TOO detached. It was actually rather bland.
3)Could be a cute story with some work. Listen to
Kleppe-san.