I emailed to Cherry a rushed revision of her own story. I -really- like what
she's done, and indeed there's some work that needs to be done with it, and
I hope she'll accept my offer to let me work on it with her. I know the
Matrix movie very well, including the background behind it. There were a few
personal inconsistencies with the Matrix characters in her story, and I'm
hoping to help with those. I'd like to see this story brought out to it's
best. I didn't want to modify her story too much though. It is -her- story,
after all.
...I wrote it as fast as I possible could, trying to dump everything in my
brain into a file, to get through the scene at the end of that first
draft.
Yea... there were quite a few holes in here (Ryoga supposedly smashed
someone's head like a melon... who's head was it?). The revision I sent you
was merely patches. I wanted to work on making it sound a little less
rushed... didn't quite get around that.
Haven't decided precisely where to go with it yet.
Heh... you want some ideas? (Discuss via email)
Going on the assumption that it will go forward, I'd like to get this up
on
the Superhighway. Are you planning on posting it anywhere on the web?
http://www.fanfic.com/~cherry/Matrix.0.5.1
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