Subject:
[FFML] [Xover] [Ranma/Tenchi] Splitting Heirs 3 part 2
Date:
Fri, 22 Oct 1999 15:27:56 -0500
From:
"Jeffrey Vasquez" <samashta@hotmail.com>
Description: Emperor Asuza must choose either Ranma or Tenchi as
his successor.
Comments: Do not trust the spell checker. The spell checker is
not your friend.
For example:
monarch of the Juraian Empire. Azusa immediately dropped to his knees,
speaking the ancient rights as he did so.
That should be "rite"
One showed Ranma battling a winged man in a dazzling display of
dexterity and power. It was no where near his true potential, and Azusa
That should be "nowhere"
And lastly
"I know how you feel though, she once left me in here for a whole week!"
Ukyou's gaged mouth emitted a high pitched squeal, that cut off abruptly
should be "gagged"
There's a bit of random capitalisation going on as well.
Tsunami's assurance makes no sense as given. Regents do rule. That's
what "regency" means. This application of the old living cooking gag is
quite clever. Frankly, I think the author should have let Ryoga escape
when he makes a break for it.
Subject:
[FFML] [fanfic][Tylor] Tylor's Fury, Chapter 5
Date:
Fri, 22 Oct 1999 11:45:11 -0400
From:
"David A. Tatum" <desaix@sysnet.net>
Description: Having had his sense of humour removed, Tylor is
now out chasing terrorists and going crazy.
Comments: This sort of removes the appeal of Tylor
Subject:
[FFML] [FFML][Sneak peek]Card Captor Moon Episode 1
Date:
Sat, 23 Oct 1999 13:22:44 -0500
From:
"Moeru" <hayama@home.com>
Description: You know as much as I do.
Comments: This looked interesting. A pity I couldn't
read it because it wasn't line wrapped.
Subject:
[FFML] [FFML][Sneak peek]Card Captor Moon Episode 1
Date:
Sat, 23 Oct 1999 13:22:44 -0500
From:
"Moeru" <hayama@home.com>
Subject:
[FFML] [FFML][Fic][SM]That Wich Does Not Kill You Chapter 6
"Pain! and
Memories?"
Date:
Sat, 23 Oct 1999 13:22:17 -0400
From:
pakman <pakman@clover.net>
Description: Looks like a Sailor Moon Mary Sue. (Billy
Joe?"
Comments: Random capitalisation strewed throughout the
story, along with punctuation errors and some spell
checker homonym errors. Sho has a tail?
Subject:
[FFML] Ranma/Gargoyles xover, begining/teaser newest Time of
changes
Date:
Sat, 23 Oct 1999 02:19:40 -0400
From:
Brendan <brenda02@m4.sprynet.com>
Description: Xanatos talks Ranma into coming to New York
so his healing powers can be studied and duplicated.
Comments: Not enough happens to really comment on the action
except to say that I have reservations about Ranma's self-healing
being a purely organic process. Some random capitalisation.
blank look he said, "The first picture is of a woman who's face was
"whose"
Subject:
[FFML] [GW][FICCY]Pyractomena Borealis Part III
Date:
Fri, 22 Oct 1999 18:18:03 -0600
From:
Katsu no Miko <tasuki@worldnet.att.net>
Description: Duo spends all of his time lusting after Heero,
and making himself an easy target for vampires.
Comments: I have to wonder why the author left the giant robots
in. They are quite irrelevant to the story she's telling.
Subject:
[FFML] [A cornicopa of animes] [fanfic] Anime Apocalypse!
Date:
Fri, 22 Oct 1999 17:35:26 -0500
From:
Andrew <ark70d@mizzou.edu>
Description: Kami-sama and Lucifer reveal their true identities,
and Kami-sama decides to end the world.
Comments: Probably intended to be funnier than it is to me.
Subject:
[FFML] [FFML][SM/Ranma][Final] All Things CHaotic #2
Date:
Fri, 22 Oct 1999 23:10:14 +0800
From:
Sining <shihlin@pacific.net.sg>
Description: A Ranma who was apparently raised by Happosai is
now living in the vicinity of the Sailor Moon cast and struggling
to understand female psychology.
Comments:
was even human sometimes, for it seemed like he did humanely impossible
things on a daily basis.
Never confuse being human with being humane.
I don't think Ranma should dodge the broom. After all, it wouldn't hurt
him and it would make Rei feel better.
Subject:
[FFML] [Ranma] Divinity: Chapter Seven
Date:
Fri, 22 Oct 1999 07:58:34 -0700
From:
Kyle Emmerson <kyle_emmerson@geocities.com>
Description: Ranma has been transported to an alternate reality where
his counterpart never learned martial arts and must fix him up with that
world's Akane in order to get home.
Comments: Given the bumbling of "Ranko" and the inept love god,
the Kitsune seem hardly needed to keep them from succeeding. Perhaps
the bumbling of the Kitsune will produce the reverse result.
Subject:
[FFML] [TM][FIC]Villians Crusade Ch 2: Getting to Know You...
Date:
Fri, 22 Oct 1999 04:07:41 EDT
From:
Ronoken@aol.com
Description: Hints are dropped.
Comments: I'm wondering how much juice Pixie Misa has. I've seen
her in action once, but she wasn't doing anything particularly
impressive.
In any case, since they are in Kagato's universe and Misa isn't wanted
for anything there, can't they just request landing clearance and land?
Surely Jurai has private commerce.
Subject:
[FFML] [Ranma][Lemon/Lime] NEW A Little Earlier part 12
Date:
Sat, 23 Oct 1999 16:32:15 -0400
From:
Stephen Ratliff <stephenratliff@crosswinds.net>
Description: 12 year old Ranma and Akane are well on
the way to making Soun and Genma grandfathers.
Comments: Pretty dull stuff really. No conflict, no
explicit sex, not much consideration of the problems
involved in barely pubescent children boinking like
bunnies.